Errata

Delete "striped"

The title bar is more accurately described as "brushed aluminum," the term you use
elsewhere.

As helpful memory-jogs, insert "green" before "zoom button" and ribbed" before
"resize box"

You might circle the little arrow badge in the lower left corner of the alias
folder--it's barely visible.

You might circle the button and the little arrow that is pointing to it--it's
easy to miss.

Perhaps boldface "both" so inattentive readers (like me) don't miss the point. (I
didn't catch it until I reread.)

delete "from"
"whence" already contains an implicit "from". It's not exactly an error to say "from
whence", but it's clunky and laks panache. Leave it for a book on Windows.

It would be helpful to append, "See p. 58, figure 2-16 for an example."

After "The first menu" perhaps insert "(the one to the right of the apple)"
Helpful for novices

"What they most resemble, actually, is little Web pages"
should be:
"What they most resemble, actually, are little Web pages"

Change "in Chapter 1" to "on page 27"
More helpful to be more specific.

after "triangle" perhaps insert the helpful "to the right of the Save As option"

Step one does not seem necessary; it asks you to startsetup an email account, this is confusing because the details of how to do this are not in the book, probably because they are not necessary. The author probably already had something setup, so he got a different dialog box. I skipped step 1 and went right to step 2, everything then worked fine.

Perhaps insert "results" after "search"

Change
"The length slider" to "The article length slider in the right-hand panel"
This helpfully matches the terminology on the screen-shot and points to this small
item's location.

Delete "main" in "main headquarters"
Redundant (?)

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I suggest this web page be modified so that clicking Clear Form also moves the cursor
into the first text entry box (page number).

After "for your digital photos" append "and other graphics files"

To prevent the reader from thinking it's only for photos, not other graphics.

Perhaps append "in this Dictionary"

(Helpful to some)

change "its" to "the program's"

Clearer

Add index entries for four of the shareware programs available at missingmanuals.com,
so that browsers there can look them up in the book and see if they want to download
them:

BBEdit, 175
Manopen, 461
Pop-up Zapper, 184
Wipecreator, 473

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You should also give these page numbers in the missingmanuals site, not just chapter-
number references.

Append, ", 493"