sentence: changed

However, this event is not, in fact, recorded,...
to
However, this event is not, in fact, always
recorded,...

...are copied and marked as backed up...
to
...are copied but not marked as backed up...

changed to

Provides NetBIOS name registration and resolution
services, translating NetBIOS computer names to IP
addresses.

...pre-loaded into the WINS cache...
to
...pre-loaded into the NetBIOS name cache...

some pruned subtree"

changed

...by never asking for the same name twice between
server restarts.
to
...by not asking for the same name again as long as
the name remains in its cache.

...this selection creates a subzone of the currently
selected zone...
to
...this selection creates a new subdomain in the
currently selected zone...

These zone must be assigned names...
to
In most cases, these zones are assigned names...

By default, the DNS server facility is installed
in caching-only mode. If your network is connected
to the Internet, then no further configuration is
required. If not, modify the DNS cache file as
indicated in step 4 below. I prefer to run a
caching-only server in manual mode. Here are the
steps for setting one up:

...that points to one or more DNS server. For example...
to
...that points to one or more authoritative DNS servers
for your domain. If you are connected to the Internet,
then these will be the Internet's root name servers;
these are provided in the default cache file provided
with Windows NT and may also be obtained from
ftp.rs.internic.net/domain/root.cache.

If you network is not connected to the Internet, then
the file should contain entries for the local root servers.
For example...

("ftp.rs.internic.net/domain/root.cache" is in italics.)

changed

...specifies a list of hosts allowed to ask for name
resolution...
to
...specifies a list of hosts which can be contacted for
name resolution...

...is checked, the WINS service interfaces with DNS
name resolution services (via the Microsoft DNS Server
facility) as required (discussed later in this chapter).
to
...is checked, the system will use DNS name resolution
sevices (via the Microsoft Server facility) to resolve
a name if WINS is unable to do so.

Address Assignment" (beginning "As we've seen...")

pic:lp=:rm-vala:rp=picasso
to
pic:lp=:rm=vala:rp=picasso

Also, remember that only items on NTFS filesystems can
be audited.

Failed remote login attempts in which an invalid
username is entered are not always recorded (there may
be a hotfix for this bug).

"IsDomainMasterBrowser" to "IsDomainMaster".

$dir = @ENV{"LOGLOC"};
now reads
$dir = $ENV{"LOGLOC"};

http://www.winntmag.com/Magazine/Article.cfm?IssueID=14&ArticleID=2816

In the paragraph "Windows NT Information," the URL did read:

"www.ntinternals.com"

Now reads:

"http://www.sysinternals.com/"

The form "2>&1" used by the UNIX Bourne shell to
combine standard output and standard error is supported
only if it follows the initial I/O redirection construct.
In other words, "> file >2&1" but ">2&1 > file" doesn't.

("file" is italicized both times.)

if [not] exists file cmd
to
if [not] exist file cmd

(in constant-width; file cmd is in constant-wdith italics.)