Errata for Revolution in The Valley [Paperback]
Submit your own errata for this product.
The errata list is a list of errors and their corrections that were found after the product was released. If the error was corrected in a later version or reprint the date of the correction will be displayed in the column titled "Date Corrected".
The following errata were submitted by our customers and approved as valid errors by the author or editor.
Color Key: Serious Technical Mistake Minor Technical Mistake Language or formatting error Typo Question Note Update
| Version |
Location |
Description |
Submitted By |
Date Submitted |
Date Corrected |
| Printed |
Page 35
first full paragraph |
In the first sentence of the first full paragraph on page 35, the phrase "In May 1981" is repeated twice. The sentence should be either:
"In May 1981, Bud pulled an all-nighter and ported QuickDraw..."
or:
"Bud pulled an all-nighter in May 1981 and ported QuickDraw..."
|
Anonymous |
Sep 06, 2009 |
Sep 09, 2011 |
| PDF |
Page 42
1st paragraph |
Antoine de St-Exupéry is misspelled as Antoine de St-Expurey :)
|
Tim Pietzcker |
Sep 12, 2010 |
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 80
last line of 1dt paragraph |
"Randy Wiggington" should be "Randy Wigginton".
This same error occurs in two other places (see index)
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 91
first line of last paragraph |
All of the spaces are missing from the first line of the paragraph, it reads:
Theleftmostpictureshowsdifferent.
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 114
1st paragraph |
"Roger van Oech"
should read:
"Roger von Oech"
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 122
2nd line of 2nd paragraph |
"Haelerli" should be "Haeberli"
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 133
5th line of 3rd paragraph |
'elicting' should be 'eliciting'.
|
Anonymous |
May 05, 2009 |
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 140
toward end of second paragraph |
"Bill" should be "Bob"
"so Bill could further distance" should be "so Bob could futher distance", or,
perhaps preferably, "so he could further distance".
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 145
first line |
"he just delivered the news it verbally"
should be
"he just delivered the news verbally"
- the word "it" should be deleted.
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 148
last line of 1st paragraph |
the phrase "for the icon pictured here" should be deleted, since it's an icon of
Bill, not Burrell. The sentence should end after "had him pose.".
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 161
4th paragraph |
Fourth paragraph ("Well, let's say...") should start with a quotation mark.
|
Anonymous |
Sep 07, 2009 |
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 191
4th line from bottom |
there should be a period and a paragraph break after the first word "(API)". The new
paragraph should start with "I gradually..."
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 205
2nd line of 3rd paragraph |
'fascimile' should be 'facsimile'.
|
Anonymous |
Sep 10, 2009 |
Sep 09, 2011 |
| Printed |
Page 211
1st paragraph of second column, eighth line |
weird superscript after "memory" should be eliminated.
|
Anonymous |
|
Sep 09, 2011 |
|
| |